The Winner Stands Alone : Chapter V by Paulo Coelho

by Paulo Coelho on February 10, 2009

Igor points to the one free lane on the Boulevard de la Croisette.

‘Let’s say that I don’t want you to go to a party, but I daren’t say so openly. If I wait for the rush hour to begin and stop my car in the middle of the road, within ten minutes, the whole of the boulevard opposite the beach will have come to a standstill. Drivers will think: “There must have been an accident” and will wait patiently. In fifteen minutes, the police will arrive with a truck to tow the car away.’

‘That kind of thing is always happening.’

‘Ah, yes, but I – very carefully and without anyone noticing – will have got out of my car and scattered nails and other sharp objects on the road in front of it. And I will have carefully painted all of these objects black, so that they blend in with the asphalt. As the tow-truck approaches, its tyres will be punctured. Now we have two problems, and the tailback of traffic will have reached the suburbs of this small city, the very suburbs where you perhaps live.’

‘You clearly have a very vivid imagination, but you would still only have managed to delay me by about an hour.’

It was Igor’s turn to smile.

‘Oh, I could come up with all kinds of ways of making the situation worse. When people started gathering round to help, for example, I would throw something like a small smoke-bomb under the truck. This would frighten everyone. I would get into my car, feigning despair, and start the engine. At the same time, though, I would empty a bit of lighter fluid on the floor of the car and it would ignite. I would then jump out of the car in time to observe the scene: the car gradually going up in flames, the flames reaching the fuel tank, the explosion that would affect the car behind as well, and so on in a chain reaction. And I could achieve all that with a car, a few nails, a smoke-bomb that you can buy in a shop, and a small amount of lighter fluid…’

Igor takes from his pocket a small flask containing some kind of liquid.

‘…about this much. I should have done that when I realised Ewa was about to leave me, to make her postpone her decision and reflect a little and consider the consequences. When people start to reflect on decisions they’re trying to make, they usually change their mind – it requires a lot of courage to take certain steps.
‘But I was too proud. I thought it was just a temporary move and that she would soon realise her mistake. I’m sure she regrets leaving me and, as I said, wants to come back. But for that to happen I need to destroy a few worlds.’

The expression on his face has changed, and Olivia is no longer amused by the story. She gets up.

‘Well, I need to do some work.’

‘But I paid you to listen to me. I paid enough to cover your whole working day.’
She puts her hand in her pocket to give him back the money, but at that moment, she sees the pistol pointing at her face.

‘Sit down.’

Her first impulse is to run. The elderly couple are still slowly approaching.
‘Don’t run away,’ he says, as if he could read her thoughts. ‘I haven’t the slightest intention of firing the gun if you’ll just sit down again and hear me out. If you don’t try anything and do as I say, then I swear I won’t shoot.’

A series of options pass rapidly through Olivia’s head, the first being to run, zigzagging her way across the street, but she realises that her legs have gone weak.

‘Sit down,’ the man says again. ‘I won’t shoot if you do as you’re told. I promise.’
Yes, it would be madness on his part to fire that gun on a sunny morning, with cars driving past outside, people going to the beach, the traffic getting heavier by the minute, and more pedestrians walking along the pavement. Best to do as the man says, even if only because she’s in no state to do anything else; she’s almost fainting.

She obeys. Now she just has to convince him that she’s not a threat, to listen to his deserted husband’s lament, to promise him that she has seen nothing, and then, as soon as a policeman appears, doing his usual round, throw herself to the ground and scream for help.

‘I know exactly what you’re feeling,’ the man says, trying to calm her. ‘The symptoms of fear have been the same since the dawn of time. They were the same when men had to face wild beasts and they continue to be so right up to the present day: blood drains away from the face and the epidermis, protecting the body and avoiding blood loss, that’s why people turn pale. The intestines relax and release everything, so that there will be no toxic matter left contaminating the organism. The body initially refuses to move, so as not to provoke the beast in question by making any sudden movement.’
‘This is all a dream,’ thinks Olivia. She remembers her parents, who should have been here with her this morning, but who had been up all night making jewellery because the day looked likely to be a busy one. A few hours ago, she had been making love with her boyfriend, whom she believed to be the man of her life, even though he sometimes hit her; they reached orgasm simultaneously, something that hadn’t happened for a long time. After breakfast, she decided not to take her usual shower because she felt free and full of energy and pleased with life.

No, this can’t be happening. She must try to appear calm.

‘Let’s talk. The reason you bought all my stuff was so that we could talk. Besides, I wasn’t getting up in order to run away.’

He presses the barrel of the gun gently against the girl’s ribs. The elderly couple pass by, glance at them and notice nothing odd. There’s that Portuguese girl, they think, trying, as usual, to impress some man with her dark eyebrows and child-like smile. It’s not the first time they’ve seen her with a strange man, and this one, to judge by his clothes, has plenty of money.

Olivia fixes them with her eyes, as if trying to tell them what’s going on just by looking. The man beside her says brightly:

‘Good morning.’

The couple move off without uttering a word. They’re not in the habit of talking to strangers or of exchanging greetings with street vendors.

‘Yes, let’s talk,’ says the Russian, breaking the silence. ‘I’m not really going to try and disrupt the traffic. I was just giving that as an example. My wife will realise I’m here when she starts to receive the messages. I’m not going to take the obvious route, which would be to go and meet her. I need her to come to me.’

This was a possible way out.

‘I can deliver the messages, if you like. Just tell me which hotel she’s staying at.’
The man laughs.

‘You suffer from the youthful vice of thinking you’re cleverer than everyone else. The moment you left here, you’d go straight to the police.’

Her blood freezes. Are they going to sit on this bench all day? Is he going to shoot her after all, now that she knows his face?

‘You said you weren’t going to shoot.’

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{ 21 comments… read them below or add one }

Nilima June 25, 2009 at 8:22 pm

I am a huge fan of your books.thanks for having such nice books…

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Philosopher June 10, 2009 at 3:09 am

Nice blog. Keep up the good work.

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mabelle May 25, 2009 at 7:51 am

great!! so great! can't wait for the 7th chapter (“,)
i think they will stay there talking till dawn, hahaha…
mr. coleho, can't thank you enough for giving us this treat to your latest book…can't wait to grab a copy(for which i have to wait longer since there is yet a release date for Asia.
salamat kaayo!! bless you!

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Dea Pranathania (Indonesia) April 27, 2009 at 9:39 pm

I love it Paulo!!! Have you ever felt so moved that it’s as if you’re possessed? Reading The Winner Stands Alone was like having my chest cracked open, the words flooding into me….
I love imagining all of the scenes in the story..

I love you Paulo…
Big Hug from Asia..

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Wilmer Gómez April 12, 2009 at 4:52 am

I’m a spanish speaking person, so i havent read anything of this chapters, i would love if you, Paulo Coelho, could tell me when the spanish version is coming to United States of A.?, when to latinoamerica (Or coming to Dominican Republic, which is my country). Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
La tendremos en 09/09. Abrazos

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shahrzad March 9, 2009 at 12:25 am

great book…as usuall…but why is it that russians always have to be portrayed as rough, harsh, and full of mystery…it seems as if we haven’t really moved on from the mentality of the cold war period…

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christine February 25, 2009 at 6:34 pm

paulo, salamat ! onto the next chapter !

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Ramprakash February 19, 2009 at 9:28 am

Hi Paulo,

You have touched most nagging issue that irks mankind for centuries and it is the issue with this body. As my guru says “Body knows only two things – survival and procreation and if we try to find expression for the life force within us which is infinite in nature in the ambit of our body, we will end up suffering – Sadhguru Jaggi Vasudev”. Its time that people make an effort to look beyond the limitations of this body, emotion and mind. Kudos to you Paulo. The story is really catching flames :)

Cheers,
Ram

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Alicia February 16, 2009 at 6:45 pm

Interesante, lastima que la traduccion no esta muy bien redactada

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nika marie February 14, 2009 at 7:19 am

wow! :)

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marie-christine February 12, 2009 at 11:01 am

oh mo dont do it please.

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Pavlik February 12, 2009 at 9:49 am

no idea how this is going to continue…I bet Igor won’t shoot her :-)

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mo February 12, 2009 at 1:55 am

i was thinking to do the same thing as igor is going to do.and i swear that i will.

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Rasha February 11, 2009 at 12:06 pm

Paula I was just reading guinness book 2009, u r in there! wow
I think u r a winner, but u are not standing alone :)

best regards
Rasha

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rasha February 10, 2009 at 9:06 pm

wow.. you got us all enthusiasts!
can’t wait for arabic version, well also can’t wait to get my hand on the book in both english and arabic, i like having both, i’m proud of my collection of you Paulo :)
u thinking about ever visiting Jordan? we’d love to have u there

yours
Rasha

PS. Rasha may sound like the country Russia, but actually in arabic it means the baby deer “gazalle”

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Leydiana February 10, 2009 at 7:44 pm

Just great, I’m so eager to read the next chapter!!!.

Thanks for sharing it.

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Serpico February 10, 2009 at 7:42 pm

Interesting!!

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Omnia February 10, 2009 at 2:27 pm

can’t wait for the next chapter…it really seems like an interesting book as usual…you are the best!!

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mabelle February 10, 2009 at 1:51 pm

great!! so great! can’t wait for the 7th chapter (“,)
i think they will stay there talking till dawn, hahaha…
mr. coleho, can’t thank you enough for giving us this treat to your latest book…can’t wait to grab a copy(for which i have to wait longer since there is yet a release date for Asia.
salamat kaayo!! bless you!

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Ayşe February 10, 2009 at 1:38 pm

İt is an amazing novel I cannot wait to read I am glad I will be in UK in March to buy it at once, but please do not shoot the poor girl
:(
I like life lessons which in between lines, I like this type of novels with a very intresting and creative story telling better (I liked very much Coelho’s books: Veronica decides to die, Zahir, Fifth Mountain, Devil and Ms., Alchemist of course)

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tata February 10, 2009 at 1:09 pm

it’s toooo interesting and i’m looking forward to next chapter…

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