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[...] Your Story in my Blog : Busy B Ranch by Savita Vega Martin Braddock [...]

By: Marie-Christine

Marie-Christine — Sun, 07 Jun 2009 02:12:29 +0000

you have been a busy bee by the sound of it

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:)

By: Britny Locke

Britny Locke — Sat, 06 Jun 2009 14:55:25 +0000

I was so confused at that title for a second…
My Goodreads name is Busy B. :) So, immediately I was drawn to the post.
But… it was really nice to read. Very true to life.

By: Yajna

Yajna — Tue, 02 Jun 2009 21:09:12 +0000

Savita, your story was simply lovely. I enjoyed reading as i do with your comments, and look forward to your further opinions and stories. Well done.

Lots of love.
Yajna

By: Mirela Baron

Mirela Baron — Tue, 02 Jun 2009 04:35:09 +0000

Congratulations, Savita!
What can I say?You are a GREAT LIFE NARATOR!!!Just that He played with his daughter and his sun,1 hour per day,in the evening;-the most painnigful thing for his whife and children,was that after he crossed the street by going to his office,he forgott all three entierly,and ALL three have FELT THAT!CRISTALL CHILDREN ARE VERY SPECIAL and I know that you UNDERSTAND ME!
Greatings To ALL from HIM!

Love,
Mirela(the woman in love)

By: Nanci

Nanci — Tue, 02 Jun 2009 02:36:10 +0000

Dear Savita Vega, loved the story. Loved the connection between nature and death and what a surprise the questions at the end were. Thanks for sharing the story, and I’m looking forward to what you create next…

Nanci :-)

By: Santosh Kalwar

Santosh Kalwar — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 21:14:00 +0000

Dear Savita,

Good story. Congratulations and well done ! :)

God blesses you !

and

God bless you all !

By: Nancy

Nancy — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 19:55:15 +0000

Savita, I enjoyed your short story. There was only one character but he was connected to so much, example nature, farm, granddaughter, Spirit.
For some reason the part that grab me the most was the description of the character diving “under the great oak table.” I felt it.

By: Cate

Cate — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 16:53:53 +0000

I like the story Savita…
an unexpected and surprise passage indeed.

almost a perfect story for an enchanting children’s book..?
Young children often deal much better with topics of such fortitude than adults sometimes ;o)

and almost, well, along the lines of a harry potter/sci-fi?!!

By: Harrkar

Harrkar — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 15:09:08 +0000

Nice one.Savita.

By: THELMA

THELMA — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 14:46:43 +0000

Sorry for the misspell.. You got it. I meant ‘story’. T.xx

By: THELMA

THELMA — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 14:44:39 +0000

Thank you, dearest Savita, for the beautiful sorry and the … message in it. How much time do we spend with our loved ones?? Do they know that we love them?
LOVE,
Thelma.

By: Heart

Heart — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 14:20:01 +0000

My dear writer and mother Savita,

Great story, saying it all about you. You care so much about your daughter, and like so many mothers, are upset when men fail the contract they took on getting a daughter or granddaughter, or a son or grandson. Your story reminds me of Cats in the Cradle. Thank you Savita and good luck with your new life, both of you.

Love,
Heart

By: Carolena Sabah

Carolena Sabah — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 13:59:24 +0000

Interesting story Savita. Hope all’s well with you!!
love,
C.

By: atella

atella — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 13:44:40 +0000

Xcellent! It made my heart leap. Thanx for sharing …
:)

By: Marie-Christine

Marie-Christine — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 12:16:21 +0000

The B ranch and its ramifications.
Well done Savita and thank you. I enjoyed your story
Love
Marie-Christine

By: Alexandra

Alexandra — Mon, 01 Jun 2009 11:57:08 +0000

Dear Savita, I was waiting your story. Just arrived, as some real coincidence. I wanted to read some nice lines, because I dont want to say something harsh to you. But it was not need, the story is perfect, my dear. I only was worrying about the lenght, knowing that you write long texts. But you did it, you wrote an interesting, provoking and intelligible short story. You result is even better than I expected. All my respects to you.
Love
Alexandra