Your Opinion on the Narrative Structure

by Paulo Coelho on July 1, 2009

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Sergio Quirós Zamora August 2, 2011 at 4:24 am

Don Paulo, he leido 3de sus libros siendo el peregrino para mi persona,una gran ayuda en una deprecion que yo sufri este libro es magico le agradesco porque me canbio la vida. espero poder llegar a leer todos sus libros.

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barbara May 19, 2011 at 1:42 am

This is my beloved book!!! I love this book because you can see the true beauty, meaning and magic of life. There is so much to learn from it. The exercises are intense and mind/life opening. As I read it I travel with you Mr.Coelho, I can see the villages, the woods, the hills/moutains. I can taste the awful rolled up cigaretts. I can feel your impatience when Petrus tells you to walk slow…
This book also keeps you in suspense right to the very end, and you want to read it quick but you read it slow because you don’t want to miss anything.
I am actually reading it again right now.

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Karen September 25, 2010 at 3:08 pm

A truely wonderful book which has made me really think and decipher me as a person and the bounderies in which I have set myself to live -I am now looking outside those bounderies and am exploring my life which is very exciting.
How fantastic that reading a book can have such an amazing effect. I am, next year walking the Pilgrims Road – another boundery I will cross

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Lucas Adams February 26, 2011 at 8:13 am

Karen, are you involved with the tradition.

Katy C. September 5, 2010 at 8:38 pm

What I wanted to say since a long time concerning Paolo Coelho’s books and also blog+quotes on facebook:
through and within all his spirituality, Paolo has a very clear and in a sense “realistic” view on life…he sees things in all its aspects –
and recognizes/accepts the “dark side of life”, the polarity in everything –
and that sadness, lonelyness, doubt and sometimes negativity are part of our existence too – just as joy, happiness etc.
Several other spiritual authors like to forward that life can be “fixed” only by “wishing for things the right way” and with positive attitude =
Which means: if things still remain difficult, then “you must be doing something wrong”…
and that puts a whole lot of stress on our shoulders.
NO ONE can be held responsible for everything that happens, that would be an unbearable burden.
Certain things can’t be “simply changed”, but need to be accepted – there is not only and solely good in this world – life’s the whole package.
And that “whole package” comes out very well in Paolo Coelho’s writing.
Well, of course my words are only a personal opinion, but see for yourself :-)

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ana September 3, 2010 at 3:41 pm

Sobre a narrativa, é precisamente o que me atrai em todos os seus livros, eu faço a viagem, entro nos seus livros como observadora, eu viajo, para mim é como E. Hemingway.

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cristina July 25, 2010 at 4:19 am

hola soy cristina soy una fan tuya e leido todos tus libros y los e comprado claro esta me encantan ofreces de cada ellos una enseñanza nueva para la vida de todos los que tienes me encanta el peregrino de compostela que gracias a ese libro quiero hacer el camino, a orillas del rio de piedra me sente y llore , pues ya conocia el sitio cuando lei el libro estupendo, la bruja de portovelo que aunque no es como tus otros libros pero cogi el mensaje divinamente, citas de amor me encantan esas citas cortas transmitiendo esa felicidad, llamada amor. el alquimista por su fuerza . si es que me gustan todos me gustaria que me mandaras una dedicatoria tuya a casa porque estoy de acuerdo con todos tus libros y ya le digo para mi como usted escribe no hay nadie. perdon por las faltas de ortografia y gracias por leer mi opinion

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Radu June 24, 2010 at 6:27 pm

Brilliant book. This is my first book I read from Paulo and I found it so brilliant. Symbols everywhere in our lives but we don’t know how to read them. Again I say brilliant, I am so excited about this book. I will buy also the other books of Paulo, hope are that great as this one is. I will come back for a review for the other books. Best regards.

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Paulo Neves April 6, 2010 at 2:58 am

Um Livro que nos mostra o “caminho” e as diversas formas de o percorrer com a mente no nosso objectivo mas sempre apreendendo com as várias fazes deste .

Uma estratégia de vida … uma apreciação da beleza do caminho que todos fazemos uma chamada de atenção para não nos perdermos com o nosso objectivo mas sim aproveitar o caminho captar a sua beleza; para nos conhecermos e evoluirmos para estarmos mais proximos dos nossos objectivos.

Obrigado PAULO.

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Sole March 1, 2010 at 3:50 am

Paulo e demais leitores, gostaria de saber mais do encontro com o demonio, ele está nas pessoas, pelo q. entendi. Muitas pessoas querem ajudar-nos “facilitando” nossas vidas e disvurtuando-nos de nossos sonhos. Muitas vezes inconcientemente, como proteção…Protegem a gente de amar o mundo, o próximo. Já me senti muito lesada nesta vida c. humanos contaminados pelo q. o demonio acha melhor…estou me situando melhor no mundo agora q. estou lendo O Diario de um mago.

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princesasighelg February 25, 2010 at 1:05 am

I liked it a lot…I have also read other books of yours which I like as well.I found this so how to say ,immediate and it had an impact almsot sensasional because you could feel the wounds of Paulo by the “dog”.So bad had an impact and it needed to be fought.So this is real life…you take the “good road”and in the meanwhile you come across temptation in every way.But you keep fighting for “good”.You just believe in what you’re expecting.Not to take the easy road but SPEND SOME TIME TO REALIZE TO GET PREPARED FOR WHAT YOUR HEART IS GOING TO MEET.I guess when it said about praying even If you don’t seem so strong at the moment,regarding faith,you still pray and that pray has an impact.I believe that.I believe faith was the crucial meaning.

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Matt January 30, 2010 at 6:26 am

I thoroughly enjoyed “The Alchemist” and “Veronika Decides to Die” but I just completed “The Pilgrimage” and I’m very disappointed. I am not inspired, it evokes very little emotional response from me, and I find it to be repetitive, trite, and unconvincing. Rather than piquing my curiosity, I am left with the feeling one would likely get after attending a Renaissance Fair – I have wasted time witnessing a bunch of screwballs. Sacred rituals? Swords? Devils embodied in a dog? Masters who are guides but are there to teach you that you don’t need a guide, speak in riddles, etc.? This story reeks of ego. It has been told numerous times throughout history and most of the time it has been told better.

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Mago Alatariel Filiurin January 22, 2010 at 12:33 am

Gostaria apenas de parabeniza-lo, depois de muitos anos e muitos livros , digasse de passgem, voce fez uma coisa muito importante, trouxe novamente a Magia para as pessoas. Sei que é muito criticado, mas, é um preço que se paga por trazer a luz em um mundo de escuridão. Seja sempre comprometido com a verdade, abraços.

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Raghav December 16, 2009 at 8:21 am

Why are you saying not to try this exercise,Its interesting and frankly I am surprised by your answer dude!

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marcos villanueva aranburu December 15, 2009 at 9:13 pm

P.Coelho says at http://www.paulocoelho.com,that the Mesenger execise,is not ok in the book.I ask ¿how can I get the ok exercise?

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Paulo Coelho December 15, 2009 at 9:37 pm

please don’t try this excercise.

Raghav December 15, 2009 at 9:17 am

Hello Mr. coelho!
Again I am commenting but on a differnt book,i.e.,’THE FIFTH MOUNTAIN’.I was too excited to read this book and at last I had done it with great thoughts and praises for you.Your hand has magic,I think so.The story is so much interesting that one can’t get up without reading the whole book.

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Raghav December 15, 2009 at 9:09 am

It’s a very,very,very interesting book.Ihad read it nearly three times.Its an admirable effort.Its exercises are hard enough to do.All in all ‘THE PILGRIMAGE’ is a very good book.

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Andrea November 23, 2009 at 2:43 am

Dear Paulo,

I love the way you writes, and its because you use well known words, is easy to understand and also, your narrative is not overloaded.

On this book in particulary (the pilgrim) the images that you describes are just amazing, and are exactly in the way the reader can imagine the hole scene in his/her mind.

Also, you give to us (the readers) the exercises of RAM, personaly, I never tried them, I not ready I guess, but its important the fact that you share them with your readers, you have changed alot of lives with your books, including mine.

greetings from Guatemala,

Andrea

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André Souza da Silveira October 27, 2009 at 2:11 pm

A estrutura dos textos de nosso autor é de magnífico acabamento, onde são anexados valores filosóficos às palavras, passando sempre uma mensagem.

Acredito que o sucesso de Paulo Coelho se dá por ele sempre tentar expressar o que realmente sente, sem deixar levar por críticas.

E uma coisa é certa, essa maneira de se expressar vai sempre ser o sucesso de quem lê e pensa, pois não adianta ser um ótimo escritor, se não tiver um público que lhe corresponda.

Um abraço.

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Harmeet Singh Walia October 20, 2009 at 9:02 pm

Hello Mr. coelho!
I have read, not even one book of yours, but i have read your, “Like the flowing river”.
Frankly speaking, i simply hated your writings the first time i read a few stories, but then, when i read the story, “The moment of Dawn”, i was greatly impressed, and in just a few days, i read almost all your the stories, and those, which i liked the most are:
ghenis khan and his felcon,
the music coming from the chapel,
the solitary piece of coal,
the pianist in the shopping mall,
these are my friends,
the importance of cat in meditation,
the second chance,
the tears of the deseart,
the cloud and the sand dunes,
norma and the good things,
the funny things about human biengs,
who would like this twenty dollar bill?,
the two jewls,
the catholic and the muslim,.
and after reading all these, i just want to read your rest of the books. i’m actually, right now, in std.12, the final year of my schooling, and it is after this year , that i will go to a college, and therefore i need to prepare for my entrance tests also. So, as soon as i get free from all this, i will buy all your books, especially, The Pilgrimage, and read them all.
thanks for having made this site, where we can share our views about your books.
Hope you keep writing excellent books,
Regards
Harmeet

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rayane rockeira September 18, 2009 at 11:59 pm

esse livro é muito bom principalmente porque fala da sua peregrinaçao a santiago e porque tem aqueles exercicios.

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daemon August 24, 2009 at 11:31 pm

Dear Paulo. With much admiration it was something of a shared journey to read this very personal adventure with you. As a story of a journey it is fascinating to see the inner and the outer journeys in constant symbiosis. Sometimes it is very hard to tell what on the road was physical or metaphysical.
It is to my interpretation more allegorical than literal. I find the narrative voice is very much the teacher in the third person although there are times when you seem to slip in first person narrative effortlessly. i guess your perspective on yourself is retrospective, and therefore with the superimposed voice of experience in the third person?
I felt the ‘exercises’ were treated superficially, in the sense that they no doubt take considerable time and perseverance to achieve; notwithstanding your long background prior, which may make these exercises much easier for you to actualise. I wonder then whether the were literary devices, props, to illustrate significant points, not necessarily about the journey to Compostela per se, but life itself?
Otherwise their significance can be taken too literally. One could easily obsess about performing exercises to become something, and ironically on the spiritual path fall into a more subtler kind of materialism. In the end i feel the real exercises are in life itself.

I admire your honesty with yourself. As in the Valkyries you do not disguise your ego, nor the problems it causes. I think this honesty is one of the unspoken, yet crucial parts of your story/ies, that ego must be acknowledged and dealt with in order to make meaningful progress on a spiritual path.
The further one proceeds, the greater the dangers of the ego in undermining ones efforts. This is a vital message at the beginning of the story about a fall from grace.
What is so important to realise behind the man with so much insight and humanity , that nonetheless there is also another side, less attractive in the light which is vain, gets angry is egotistical.
Yet the journey which is after all an allegory for life itself, is designed to expose all of these faults and correct them with lessons harsh or gentle on that road.
That to me is your strength that you do not claim to be superhuman, but very human in a very nice sense ultimately.

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jose August 5, 2009 at 11:19 am

gracias

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Savita Vega July 31, 2009 at 3:24 pm

The structure of this book is very linear (no flashbacks or frames), it progresses temporally in a straight line, from one moment to the next. This, I think, is very appropriate, as the structure of the book mirrors the journey of which it tells.

There is another thing, though, that I think is even more interesting about the structure of this story. It reminds me of the structure of the tales of the quest for the Holy Grail. In the tales of the Holy Grail, it almost always happens the same: the seeker, like Paulo with his sword, is given a glimpse of the Grail at the onset, and this glimpse fires the inspiration for a long and adventurous quest to regain what was lost in that moment, usually as a result of some flaw on the part of the seeker. The Pilgrimage is set up in precisely the same way. It starts with a “glimpse of the sword” – Paulo almost attains the sword, it is right in front of his face, but the very moment that he reaches out for it, it is taken away. Then he must set out on this long quest, full of all sorts of trials and challenges, in order to regain what was lost in that moment. He has to prove himself worthy of the attainment of his Grail.

This similarity is astounding. The structure of The Pilgrimage perfectly mirrors the basic archetypal structure of all Grail quests: the glimpse > the loss, due to some fault > the setting out on the quest, inspired by that glimpse > the trials (failures and victories) > the proof of worthiness > and finally the attainment of the Grail (in Paulo’s case, the Sword).

I am just wondering, Paulo, if you were consciously aware of this structure when you were writing the book? Was it your conscious intent to mirror the Grail legends? Or is it that this archetypal structure is so much a part of the quest that your quest took the same form?

Much Love,
Savita

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Carolena Sabah August 5, 2009 at 3:32 pm

Nice Savita!

YAMILETH TORREALBA July 17, 2009 at 8:27 pm

BUENAS TARDES, NECESITO LE HAGAN LLEGAR ESTA INVITACION AL ESCRITOR PAULO COHELO, LE ESCRIBO DESDE BARQUISIMETO UNA CIUDAD DE VENEZUELA, EN OTRAS OPROTUNIDADES LE HE QUERIDO HABLAR REFERENTE A UN PERIGRINAJE QUE SE HACE EN MI CIUDAD A LA SANTA PATRONA LA DIVINA PASTORA, POR FAVOR PARA EL PROXIMO AÑO EL 14 DE ENERO DE 2010, SE HACE COMO YA SE HA HECHO DURANTE 150 O MAS, AHORA NO RECUERDO, PERO LE HAGO EXTENSIVA MI INVITACION, PARA QUE PRESENCIE TAN EXCELENTE DEMOSTRACION DE FE YA QUE DE TODOS LAS CIUDADES Y PAISES CERCANOS VIENEN A TAL PERIGRINAJE, DONDE POR LO MINIMO ASISTENten MAS DE 2000 PERSONAS,,a pagar promesas donde ella ha consebidos milagros! por favor,,,,respondame a mi email ya que es una promesa que le hize a la virgen donde le prometi por la salud de un hermano que se la iba a presentar a mi escritor favorito, ya uqe he leido la mayoria de sus obras, y por las señales es que le estoy escribiendo…saludos fraternales y espirituales para con usted!Yamileth

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Angela M.C. D'Alton July 14, 2009 at 7:06 pm

For me this book has everything…It is a masterpiece on living ones life. The way it was written made me feel I was on the journey and I shared in the happenings. The exercises were brilliant and I continue to do some of them…I could feel the strong presence of Petrus and also the sometimes tension between the two of you….I was part of the anticipation as to whether you would get to the top of the waterfall and part of the terror of the black dog…I cried when you looked into the eyes of the lamb and felt it a particularly special spiritual moment. I have never made this pilgrimage but know after being on the road with you in the book I have no choice. I feel compelled to make my own pilgrimage. Thank you a thousand times for this wonderful book. It may sound funny but if I have to go away and am feeling a bit unsure about what I have to do I bring the book with me….It reassures me…I can do what I set out to…

always with love….Angela

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Andrea July 9, 2009 at 6:49 pm

I fell in love with this book. Is rare i get hook deeply into the story and having a buddhist background gave me another prospective on being human. During the read too many moments I felt I grasped something deep. I felt the rhythm how it was narrated was perfect. Quick description of the place, of the mood of the “time” never boring. People with no much connection with their own spirituality may find it heavy to understand only with the thought. The reader need to rise to the challenge.

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Catherine July 8, 2009 at 1:10 pm

A tough book to get the hang of… because of the issues that were being presented: eg: R.A.M.
which of course made me feel as if I could also be on that journey and facing the challenges of RAM…

It was a good book for slowing down my usual reading habits – to browse or race through a story… I really had to grasp the concepts if I were to complete the book…

I should like to read it again – now that I know I reached the end and understood the concepts.

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iamana August 20, 2009 at 11:17 pm

Hi Catherine,
I understand and share a similar experience with you. I started to read this book 4 times, but just could not focus enough to get past the first RAM exercise. I was clearly not ready to read it, even though I “wanted” to. Interesting.

Much turmoil in life at that time- could’ve used the exercises in retrospect, but I wasn’t ready for them, I guess and I had too much internal “static” to be able to hear the lessons Paulo wanted to convey through describing his own journey.

If you have trouble “slowing down” like I did, constantly preoccupied with busy-ness of daily life (who isn’t?) you might enjoy “The Witch of Portobello”. I read that many people didn’t like it and consider it one of his weaker books. I can’t understand that! It is my favorite- spoke many messages to me.

there are some wonderful insights-AHA moments about how difficult it is to learn to just be still in one’s mind. How to learn to be comfortable and accept “blank spaces” between thoughts and activity to just be still in heart mind and be aware. Hard for me anyway. I wonder what you think of it?

marcos villanueva aranburu December 16, 2009 at 8:08 pm

Thanks by your reply.I just will read the chapter,but not the exercise.

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bishara June 10, 2010 at 10:37 pm

i am reading the pilgrimage in English and i found an error about when Muslim take an anual trip from (medina to Mecca ) not the other way around as it was written in the book

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johanna Prinsloo April 27, 2010 at 10:02 pm

I just did a mandala on the water meditation. I use my pencil as if it is my finger and let the line do the walking…and I am going to do it again and again. It was such a amazing experience.
Thank you so much.

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