10 SEC READ: The muddy road

by Paulo Coelho on December 5, 2010


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EN ESPANOL CLICAR AQUI> Los dos monjes
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Tanzan and Ekido were once travelling together down a muddy road. A heavy rain was still falling. Coming around a bend, they met a lovely girl in a silk kimono and sash, unable to cross the intersection.

“Come on, girl,” said Tanzan at once.
Lifting her in his arms, he carried her over the mud.

Ekido did not speak again until that night when they reached a lodging temple. Then he no longer could restrain himself.

“We monks can’t be near females,” he told Tanzan, “especially not young and lovely ones. It is dangerous. Why did you do that?”

“I left the girl there,” said Tanzan. “Are you still carrying her?”

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Khanum January 26, 2011 at 9:33 pm

short content but great meaning…thanks a lot :)

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my_name_is_jam December 29, 2010 at 2:13 pm

I like it :D

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Waseem Babar December 29, 2010 at 8:43 am

Great short read!
To me these are words of wisdom.
Feelings are the heartbeats of words, without feelings words are dead words. Tanzan not only pays attention to the heartbeats of Ekido’s words but also that they are faster.
If we take the feelings out of Ekido’s words, we can’t make sense of Tanzan’s reply to them.

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Raj Kapoor December 27, 2010 at 8:38 am

mind have memory ,mind have imagination
heart (soul) have power , purity and dedication
the thought can be corrupted but purity can’t
a dedicated soul always sees how to help/assist in making it all easy for another soul let it be a human or t…hat of an animal …
Ekido will be soon be carrying his soul in his palm by end of journey

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Themba December 26, 2010 at 3:07 pm

I love the spiritual content in all the comments and May God be your guide always.

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Fabiola December 26, 2010 at 6:25 am

Que foto!!!!!!!

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cheryl field December 17, 2010 at 6:54 am

So never suppose you know anothers heart or intention. Be your own judge not that of your fellow man. A hard thing to learn, but once learned you have peace and a still mind.♥

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Salman Ata December 15, 2010 at 3:04 pm

a very straightforward but still hidden msg in this small story…thats inspiring…
all about heart, mind feeling and concentration

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Nancy Dodeja December 14, 2010 at 2:38 pm

Tanzan followed the spirit of the law, while Ekido followed the letter of the law.Emmanuel Kant says intention is everything. Whom do you think acted in the best manner?

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Mary Gomes December 22, 2010 at 11:10 am

It reminds me of the Pharisees who followed the letter of the law, while Christ, who is God the Trinity, followed the spirit of His law.

Shachi December 14, 2010 at 7:30 am

Its simple yet beautiful!!!!!!!!
Lovely and its msg is beautiful

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np December 13, 2010 at 1:05 am

this story is not stressing the ability to be detached, it’s stressing the purity of heart and mind.

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Maita December 12, 2010 at 4:31 am

I should say I’m so impressed with the hidden statement in the story.

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vee December 14, 2010 at 1:44 am

absolutley beautiful! i had to read it twice to comprehend the hidden msg!

tara December 11, 2010 at 6:55 pm

simple and lovely .

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Anshul December 11, 2010 at 5:47 pm

It’s Just what you feel….:)

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Anshul December 11, 2010 at 5:43 pm

It’s just what u feel…

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Sajith December 11, 2010 at 11:49 am

Just inspiring.. Simple and to the point.

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zulya December 10, 2010 at 7:46 pm

so interesting

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Swati December 10, 2010 at 6:31 pm

i feel shiver at the last line, although it is the most simple one..the most simplest things inspire you.

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mamta nanda December 10, 2010 at 11:30 am

Thank you for this beautiful reminder. I have been carrying this reminder with me as it helped me tremendously to let go of some other stuff that I had been carrying around with me unnecessarily.

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dominique wiche December 10, 2010 at 11:10 am

The pure heart has a detached mind that senses what has to be done when it’s needed to be done without sticky thoughts…

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Aparna December 10, 2010 at 7:26 am

simple and profound! Loved it!

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msweng December 9, 2010 at 3:17 pm

delicious.

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Gabriela Romaria December 9, 2010 at 11:46 am

Lots of determination. maybe they were guy! lol

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Muhammad Ali December 8, 2010 at 6:18 pm

Wonderful…….

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IN SEARCH OF PEACE......... December 8, 2010 at 4:43 pm

detachment from the situations and people is what we should all seek for it will help us to move on in life and the after life as well……..

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vicky aarakit February 17, 2011 at 2:45 pm

this is a good thought we shouldnt always stick to things that dont matter

Randy December 8, 2010 at 9:36 am

Dear Paulo,

This is a parallel of a Zen story.

The essence of the story reminds me the transient nature of life and not hold on to anything good nor bad.

:-)

Randy, Singapore

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helen December 8, 2010 at 5:48 am

i wish i can make something that succinct and with such impact. 10 seconds and i already get the lesson of detachment. i am such a fan!

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Eileen Napier December 7, 2010 at 11:13 pm

maktub

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uzma December 7, 2010 at 10:47 pm

superb…

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sam December 7, 2010 at 9:08 pm

Gr8 story sir, it’s beauty lies in it’s simplicity

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sherry December 7, 2010 at 8:20 pm

yes sometimes we forget to to leave what’s in the past. thanks so much for the reminder

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Abdul Wahid Al Bastaki December 7, 2010 at 7:52 pm

A perfect example for our life. We should be like Tanzan, dwe should not cling to issues that hold us back from progress, and freedom.

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Mathilde December 7, 2010 at 7:44 pm

smile :)

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chasing dogs December 7, 2010 at 7:41 pm

simple and brilliant!

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Mariangel December 7, 2010 at 7:06 pm

Me encantó!!

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avantika December 7, 2010 at 6:54 pm

dear paulo, what you write reaches my heart. thank you :)

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Malihe December 7, 2010 at 6:52 pm

Hi Aksh. How do you know all about it? Today I love you more than Paulo.

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aksh December 8, 2010 at 4:11 am

Thanks for your love malihe; inquisitive soul that i have been, i read it in some quasi religious text, and my iimagination being Ok, i can sort of see the scene !

love

Monika December 7, 2010 at 5:05 pm

I feel like the monk in the image.

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