10 SEC READ: The muddy road

by Paulo Coelho on December 5, 2010


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EN ESPANOL CLICAR AQUI> Los dos monjes
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Tanzan and Ekido were once travelling together down a muddy road. A heavy rain was still falling. Coming around a bend, they met a lovely girl in a silk kimono and sash, unable to cross the intersection.

“Come on, girl,” said Tanzan at once.
Lifting her in his arms, he carried her over the mud.

Ekido did not speak again until that night when they reached a lodging temple. Then he no longer could restrain himself.

“We monks can’t be near females,” he told Tanzan, “especially not young and lovely ones. It is dangerous. Why did you do that?”

“I left the girl there,” said Tanzan. “Are you still carrying her?”

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Nikhil December 7, 2010 at 4:31 pm

Very nice , thank you.

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MIRO December 7, 2010 at 4:29 pm

ONE OF THE BEST ZEN STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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kern December 7, 2010 at 3:36 pm

Hallo,
the pictur is very beatifull

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guddu December 7, 2010 at 3:33 pm

Hi Paulo
i think it means that Ediko is still carrying the beauiful girl in his thoughts where as Tanzan left the thoughts with the girl itself. Correct me if am wrong. Paulo, i want to write satirical novels and make movies on them. Could you guide me? i belong to India

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shubi December 7, 2010 at 3:08 pm

Hehehehe…
Nice One….
Worth A Reading…
Thnx Paulo….

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vineetha December 7, 2010 at 2:25 pm

thats a good one..

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Sousan December 7, 2010 at 2:08 pm

Awesome!But I understand both of them!

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Nancy December 7, 2010 at 5:20 pm

I smiled when I read your comment.

vidya December 7, 2010 at 1:30 pm

really superb!! this work made me to think alot..

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May December 7, 2010 at 1:27 pm

Amazing!!!!!!!!!! It is your intentions that count not your actions!

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ishita December 7, 2010 at 1:12 pm

hi paulo….
it was indeed a very nice thought.
and a very different approch….

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Ranjit December 7, 2010 at 2:03 pm

Hi,

You can speak volumes of action without spelling a word.

In life action speak louder than words, this has been nicely depicted vin above peice of work.

sadi December 7, 2010 at 12:48 pm

i love u paulo. you made my day.. this is sooo heart touching..:DDDD

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Joginder Rohilla December 7, 2010 at 12:14 pm

superb !!!

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kirti makhija December 7, 2010 at 11:38 am

touchy ! true ! it applies to lot a things, especially to human psyche !

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mital December 7, 2010 at 11:37 am

Hi Paulo,

this is the thing abt u what makes me mad !!!!!!!!! and thinking abt everything again n again

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Diva December 7, 2010 at 11:33 am

that was amazing!!! truly enlightening!!!!

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Cherie^ December 7, 2010 at 11:09 am

Beautiful, just beautiful. c:

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Rohan December 7, 2010 at 10:54 am

While the moral is different this story reminds me of a passage I read in a book:
“Every difficulty, disharmony and obstacle is either because we refuse to let go of what we no longer need, or refuse to accept what we require”

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hana December 7, 2010 at 1:52 pm

well this passage is wonderful…but hurts in the same time…i don’t know if u’ll understand…hope u will!:)

mostafa khorasani December 7, 2010 at 10:54 am

hi MR paulo
i love u …

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Carolena Sabah December 7, 2010 at 10:42 am

Dangle a carrot in front of a little boy and tell him he can’t have it… what’s he gonna do? naturally, he’s gonna fight to get that carrot. Hand him that same carrot nonchalantly, he’ll look at it for a minute and toss it to the side.

Ekido was told not to touch such things that it’s dangerous, as most of us have experienced this from all over society, family, the church towards many issues which i believe is the root of a lot of our societies problems. The church enforces it with the Fear of the punishment by God… etc etc.

These forced repressions, followed blindly lead to unhealthy situations such as Ekido’s obsessive thoughts….

A wonderful story!
Much Love
xxoo

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Carolena Sabah December 7, 2010 at 10:47 am

type A personality correction: ‘… our societal problems’

ann December 7, 2010 at 10:23 am

i thought of your book “the Devil and Miss Prymm” after reading this one. about temptation.. definitely the other monk (Ekido) have carried the girl on the way home..

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Mathilde December 7, 2010 at 10:22 am

I love this story but read it before in my book The book of Zen Freedom of the Mind. Starting the morning reading it again, was a very good start….

I love reading your 10 sec read! Thank you

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Raj December 7, 2010 at 9:58 am

Simply, nice. The original and the thoughful comments.Good old way of narrating principles of living life.

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Elvira December 7, 2010 at 9:34 am

I Like it! It’s all about the thoughts in our minds. Thank You, Paulo

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Satora December 7, 2010 at 9:25 am

The “homeless monk” compiled beautiful zen stories…101 of them…

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Aamna December 7, 2010 at 9:18 am

It made me “=)”.

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BIENVENIDO S VILLAPANDO December 7, 2010 at 8:53 am

Life is a gift . . . while our Christian life on earth is short, an eternally fulfilling life awaits those who with perseverance lives a useful and loving life – how we have loved as Christ has loved . . . this is how we shall be judged.

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Zoe December 7, 2010 at 8:41 am

Walk in the spirit: and you shall not fulfill the lusts of the flesh. – Gal 5:16

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Alexandra December 7, 2010 at 8:11 am

I hope I am not wrong, but maybe I read something similar in the few pages you give us translated in English, by abbot Burckhard, in The Way of the RAven ans he said there” Do it differently”…that was the key. It was about helping some woman, but they had to hurry for a sermon, I guess…hope I did not mispelled name.

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mahi December 7, 2010 at 8:07 am

Great piece of writing :)

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aksh December 7, 2010 at 7:50 am

Buddha’s Warning to his Bhikhu’s Against Even looking at Women’s face, Women Portrayed as source of temptation and resultant degeneration; this is for men who are not yet men, who need to find someone else to blame for their ‘failures’

Are women to blame, certainly not ! Fire cannot be blamed for burning you down, if u cannot ‘use’ it properly. Water cannot be blamed for killing you, if u go on drinking till your insides burst !

Secondly, I find buddha’s warning strange. He was one who was infatuated with women, afterall what kind of man, if not one totally besotted with women will have an orgy with several of them, for several nights. Booze and women. On one of such nights, Buddha woke up from his intoxicated sleep a little earlier than usual, and he was filled with disgust at the sight before him, tumbled tumblers, half naked women lying all over, snorting, their hair dishevelled and make up all made down. In that moment of disgust he called it quits, and because he was an honest, sincere and intense man, he went on and on and finally what we have is all the budhism, dalai lama, zen,….

Buddha had transcended women and sex, he could relate to a person without first relating it to sex, but he could do that only because he did not avoid women. His advise to his bhikhu’s to stay away from women has ensured that the poor bhikhu’s never transcend women and sex, perhaps that is why we have so many millions of followers, possibly billions if u count across the centuries, and so few, so few enlightened beings. Looks like Buddha made a mistake.

First bhikhu Tanzan, who carried the women across, he was probably ‘been there, done that’ so far as sex and women is concerned, second bhikhu Ekido, who asked the question, he needs to explore sex and women more, that is his path. Closing his mind, putting his head in sand like ostrich ( following buddha’s advise on the matter ) will not help him transcend.

at the bottom of this page, sundas expressed adesire to hear more from tanzan and Ekido, how about hearing more from teh man who is supposed to have made the rule ?

love

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Ritu Sharma December 7, 2010 at 12:49 pm

Wow….Aksh…….I so agree with you….:)

Badesca December 7, 2010 at 7:38 am

Very nice.

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saadat December 7, 2010 at 9:32 am

I liked the title most with story,the tile is so awesome, hopeful natural and realistic.

“I am muddy girl”

Tun tun December 7, 2010 at 7:31 am

In the bhuddhist philosophy, Attachment is equated suffering. Tanzan was able to renounce attachment while Ekido is not released from attachemnt to the lovely girl.

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Abdul Wahid Al Bastaki December 7, 2010 at 7:47 pm

Yes, you hit the nail on the head.

Shiz December 7, 2010 at 6:41 am

Thanks for this fable..
I did ponder things a lot. Very short and simple, but has a very broad meaning. Each of us has its own way of understanding this fable, most of us judge Ekido directly but Ekido’s reason were not mentioned in this story. Im not saying what Tanzan did was wrong, but we should just consider everything before we judge. We may not know Ekido has a very convincing reason for his actions.. :D

Good Day!

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Bunchy Rahuman December 7, 2010 at 6:36 am

Nice story but let us have the humility to admit that we are the Ekidos and not the Tanzans

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sushmita December 7, 2010 at 6:21 am

brilliant !! awesome!! i am so thankful to you for being my light …

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emanuela December 7, 2010 at 6:14 am

I just started my day with this reading. It is amazing how some of us can let go of things and some can’t. I am just wondering what things should we let go and what should we keep?

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sharma December 7, 2010 at 12:02 pm

i do have such dillema quite often, can’t let go the incident out of my mind immediately most of the time. when i am hunged over with such kind of feeling, restricts me to concentrate in the present. what would be the best way out, just wondering???

olimpia December 7, 2010 at 6:04 am

no lo llegue a comprender muy bien, tengo que reflecionar muy bien sobre este escrito,gracias por hacerme pensar.

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Sara December 7, 2010 at 5:46 am

Hahahahahahahaha..indeed!hahahah

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sapna December 7, 2010 at 5:40 am

a good story we need to apply it in lives & make sure that we do not carry unecessary loads .we must learn to unburden ourself & keep our minds light & free .

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Sol December 7, 2010 at 5:21 am

Thank you for this reminder. The story is about living in the present moment. The monk, Ekido asking about the girl in the evening was still at the muddy road in his mind, and not in the present moment. He had not been able to let go of the image of the girl, as had Tanzan.

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Sunita December 7, 2010 at 5:17 am

The first word that came to my mind after reading it was Awesum… We at times refrain from doing some things but at the back of our mind we are just thinking abt it…

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Ganesh December 7, 2010 at 5:10 am

Yes story is very good. Its nicely depicts that all good or bad are carried within our heart and conscience. Better pure and clean in heart than in brain. Do what your heart says !!

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mukesh December 7, 2010 at 5:01 am

tanzan and ekido are the two reflections of our mind. Tanzan thinks wisely and he is ready to bend the rules. Ekido, on d other hand, is an idiot, who don’t use his brain bcos he believes he shouldn’t. We believe in something to jst to do so. Tanzan derives his beliefs but beliefs derive ekido

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arsenius December 7, 2010 at 4:42 am

we foget that we had left everythings behind us,,,an the important things we take we us in our heart

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Lay Nge December 7, 2010 at 3:48 am

It is interesting to see the 2 different kinds of intention and thinking that Ediko and Tanzan
had. Tanzan wants to help and for him, it is much important than rules. But Ediko just wants to follow the rules that monk needs to and nothing else. From this story, we learned that there are many things we need to do first than to follow the rules.

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gayle December 7, 2010 at 3:44 am

intentions matter, when ur intentions are right u dont need to worry about ur actions,,,Tanzan has a pure intention of just helping the lovely girl not minding rules that will hinder his intention of helping, unlike ekido, though he didnt help the girl he caused himself to sin because of his thought about being close to a girl…poor ekido, he carried a heavier load because of his impure intentions…

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nida khan December 7, 2010 at 3:27 am

just read it in d morning. . .a wonderful thought to start my morning with. . .thanks paul

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Dulce December 7, 2010 at 2:36 am

Sometimes we’re overly righteous that by doing so, we become too focused on the letter of the law rather than its spirit. Thank you Paulo, i love all your books. It’s like always attending a spiritual retreat after reading each of them.

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Marjan December 7, 2010 at 2:34 am

I loved it! Thank you. It is the thought and what we carry in our heart that makes the difference. As usual you touched a nerve! Thank you!

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Vinay December 7, 2010 at 2:30 am

Hi Paulo and readers,
This story demonstrates that there is a there is a thin veil that separates Almighty and his angels.Has anyone heard or experienced discrimination by Him on any basis? It is only we who create artificial boundaries between us and try to compartmentalize ourselves.In fact that is what creates rifts between people and nations.My thoughts got further boost when I read the story and get similar boosts when I look at His generosity!
His blessings sometimes seem to be weird but we have to learn to either decipher or wait till we bet so wise as to be able to appreciate.
Best wishes.

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