IMPORTANT: in USA, ““Eleven Minutes” is available as an ebook for 0,99 USD till this next Sunday, May 13 in Kindle + Nook + iBookstore
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EM ESPANOL AQUI>>>: Once minutos
EM PORTUGUES: Onze minutos
The men she had met since she arrived in Geneva always did everything they could to appear confident, as if they were in perfect control of the world and of their own lives; Maria, however, could see in their eyes that they were afraid of their wife, the feeling of panic that they might not be able to get an erection, that they might not seem manly enough even to the ordinary prostitute whom they were paying for her services. If they went to a shop and didn’t like the shoes they had bought, they would be quite prepared to go back, receipt in hand, and demand a refund. And yet, even though they were paying for some female company, if they didn’t manage to get an erection, they would be too ashamed ever to go back to the same club again because they would assume that all the other women there would know.
‘I’m the one who should feel ashamed for being unable to arouse them, but, no, they always blame themselves.’
To avoid such embarrassments, Maria always tried to put men at their ease, and if someone seemed drunker or more fragile than usual, she would avoid full sex and concentrate instead on caresses and masturbation, which always seemed to please them immensely, absurd though this might seem, since they could perfectly well masturbate on their own.
She had to make sure that they didn’t feel ashamed. These men, so powerful and arrogant at work, constantly having to deal with employees, customers, suppliers, prejudices, secrets, posturings, hypocrisy, fear and oppression, ended their day in a nightclub and they didn’t mind spending three hundred and fifty Swiss francs to stop being themselves for a night.
‘For a night? Now come on, Maria, you’re exaggerating. It’s really only forty-five minutes, and if you allow time for taking off clothes, making some phoney gesture of affection, having a bit of banal conversation and getting dressed again, the amount of time spent actually having sex is about eleven minutes.’
Eleven minutes. The world revolved around something that only took eleven minutes.
And because of those eleven minutes in any one twenty-four-hour day (assuming that they all made love to their wives every day, which is patently absurd and a complete lie) they got married, supported a family, put up with screaming kids, thought up ridiculous excuses to justify getting home late, ogled dozens, if not hundreds of other women with whom they would like to go for a walk around Lake Geneva, bought expensive clothes for themselves and even more expensive clothes for their wives, paid prostitutes to try to give them what they were missing, and thus sustained a vast industry of cosmetics, diet foods, exercise, pornography and power, and yet when they got together with other men, contrary to popular belief, they never talked about women. They talked about jobs, money and sport.
Something was very wrong with civilisation, and it wasn’t the destruction of the Amazon rainforest or the ozone layer, the death of the panda, cigarettes, carcinogenic foodstuffs or prison conditions, as the newspapers would have it.
It was precisely the thing she was working with: sex.
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In USA, “Eleven Minutes” is available as an ebook for 0,99 USD till this next Sunday, May 13 in Kindle + Nook + iBookstore
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I read Eleven Minutes as a 13-year-old. But more than 8 years later, I understand it better. Back then I saw the sex in it. Today I see the love. It’s about loving and expecting nothing in return. I loved and expected just a little warmth in return but ended up being hurt and misunderstood. Shows that not every man is Ralf Hart. Perhaps you are the only man who understands women… Lots of love..
Pat …love is not in our hands…it just happens…..no reasons behind….may happen between people who never know its going to happen between them….you never know when ….at what age…sometimes hurts like anything as they can never meet…dont have any future…repent for why it happened…but it was in there destiny….any how i agree with Paulo who oftenly says Love and Pain go side by side….in nut shell i conclude that if Pain is in your destiny you will fall in love with a wrong person , or at wrong age or time , or you wont get it in reciprocation….
Dear Pat , I often get sacred messages from Angels through either books of Paulo or his Blog…and many a times from comments on his Blog….your previous comment has a deep message for me which I needed the most ….the message is …..”"or that despite our mistakes, we all have an inner value, wich is more important than everything (furthermore, errors are not necessarily evil!…)”"…..you may not understand but Paulo does…. after all GOD has its own Mysterious ways of doing things……thanks to Paulo and Pat you too for being a medium…..I was in dying need of this message…..
In some book Paulo has written your Gaurdian Angels advise you or speak to you but use the lips of unknown people…you have to recognise the message and just follow it…. Thanks once again…. Pat your lips have been used in transmitting me the message….
“11 Minutes” is the first of your books I have ever read. I think I inhaled it in 11 minutes too…how do you do that? How do you express each of us in your characters so accurately – so humanely…all the minutia of our lives, hopes, dreams, differences and fears. Sex…I’m a retard like most of us…well, sounds like there’s hope. Thank you, my friend…such a wonderful read and I love Brazil…I visited many years ago…you express well your cultural heart…that’s it…the dearness of Brazil comes through so strong. Thank you again and again.
I love Veronika decides to die, it changed the way I look the life.
Una curiosidad…¿porqué tienen que ser once minutos? podrían ser 3 minutos o 45 minutos! o podrían ser otra cosa!
¿porqué le damos tanto valor al sexo? eso es algo también que me parece interesante preguntar. Es que siempre todo el mundo habla de sexo. Desde que era una adolescente escucho a todo el mundo hablar de sexo, hablar siempre de lo mismo también aburre. Creo que si las personas no se preocuparan tanto por el sexo, este mundo funcionaría mejor. Parece que este mundo gira en torno al sexo, el dinero por medio del sexo, las mentiras para el sexo, …bueno esta es mi opinión.
Si la gente se preocupara más en reir y transformar la vida en algo más divertido…yo creo que incluso el sexo sería más sano, más divertido, y más natural. Incluso en el cine, una pelicula sin sexo parece que no tiene salida al mercado.
Bueno esto es lo que pienso.
Toñi.
perfectly designed work . a gem of writing !
Thank you sir !!
salute !!
Love your works…I have read The Alchemist many time…..
Este livro é muito bom, e uma história real, exelente exemplo de como uma mulher pode mudar o seu destino com amor.
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